11b. Feedback from script

During the process of wiritng our script, we got in touch with script writer, Dudi Appleton and were able to send him our script form him to read over and see what he thought.

http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0032425/ this is a link to Dudi Appleton's IMBD page.

In order to get his feedback, one member of our group, Fiona Aldwin, had a skype conversation with him to see what he thought.

Dudi recommned that we changed certain aspects of our script to make it more sutible for a short film as he beleived the story line would seem rushed if we left it as it was. As a result of this we added in a montage of Amy and Josh. This enabled us to be able to show more of the relationship between the two characters in a shorter amount of time. We also edited the ending to make it more shocking and exciting for the audiance by making the policeman who Josh has a meeting with during the film, to have been friends with Josh's late father before he passed away.