http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0032425/ this is a link to Dudi Appleton's IMBD page.
In order to get his feedback, one member of our group, Fiona Aldwin, had a skype conversation with him to see what he thought.
Dudi recommned that we changed certain aspects of our script to make it more sutible for a short film as he beleived the story line would seem rushed if we left it as it was. As a result of this we added in a montage of Amy and Josh. This enabled us to be able to show more of the relationship between the two characters in a shorter amount of time. We also edited the ending to make it more shocking and exciting for the audiance by making the policeman who Josh has a meeting with during the film, to have been friends with Josh's late father before he passed away.
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