As a group we made a film treatment. We presented it to the other students in our group and they gave us some feedback on how to improve our film. Individually I then adapted our treatment to include the feedback from the class and made it into the Prezi below.
When we gave feedback to the class, they asked how we would show that Josh's father had died and somebody gave the idea of having him looking though photographs so we have added this into the film to make it clear what the issue is. We also decided to show a montage of clips of Josh being rebellious because this will make it easier to stick within out 5 minute time limit of our short film.
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